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Do you think the following is a weak or strong thesis statement: “The subject of this paper is my experience with teaching elementary school children”? If yes, why is it weak? How could you improve it? If no, what qualities do you think it has that make it adequate?
 

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Preview: ... er through my paper (albeit briefly).  For example, a persuasive paper on the benefits of discussion-led math lessons might read, "Discussion-led math lessons are beneficial to students of all ...
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Preview: ... ecific issues to explore.  For example the statement can be " The subject of th ...
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Preview: ... a thesis statement always try to make it self explanatory a ...
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Preview: ... bout but not the point the authro is trying to make. It is very vague and not strong at all. This is more of a weak topic sentence you might see in th ...
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Preview: ... a better teacher, a better student, and a better human being. or: My experience with elementary school children has been as a parent, teacher, and peer. Or something to the effect of the thesis statements above.  By including a list of mod ...
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