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Due on Jun. 23, 2012
Asked on Jun. 23, 2012 at 10:12:14AM

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Reread your paper which you submitted. Identify your thesis statement. Based on what you’ve learned from the reading and from class discussion, rewrite your thesis statement. Post your old thesis and your new thesis and explain why the new one is better.

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Revising the Thesis

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Posted on Jun. 23, 2012 at 10:30:59AM

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Preview: ... al to the specified audience are formatted similarly. Adding the titles of the magazines add strength to the thesis statement because it provides more clarity about the focus o ...

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